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 Karakis Application (Approved: 25.Jan.2015.)

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PostSubject: Karakis Application (Approved: 25.Jan.2015.)   Mon 12 Jan - 8:31

Name: Karakis
Legacy Name: Humberstone
Guild Name: Republic Of Starlight
Race: Cathar
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Height: About 1.6-7m
Weight: Thin, but not unhealthily so.
Eyes: Red
Hair: "Bald" but fur is grey/black
Skin: Grey/black
Physical Markings: None
Birthplace: Coruscant
Class: Consular
Advanced Class: Shadow
Skills (Crew Skills): Cybertech
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Personality: Quiet, Cold.
Motivations: Keeping himself alive long enough to find his brother and turn him into an ally.
Likes: Combat, Being Undetected, Non-Force Using Opponents, Droids, Rebellious Jedi.
Dislikes: Force-Using Opponents, Stealth Detectors, Sith, Over-zealous Jedi, Gizka, Mynocks, Jawas.
Fears: Being forced into combat with his brother.
Gear: Starting Gear, Double Bladed Saber
Background Story: When he and his twin were younger, Karakis was always the more quiet one, keeping himself out of sight and sneaking around, he used this to his advantage when he saw his brother getting bullied by other kids on coruscant, as they wouldn't expect him to sneak up behind them. This behaviour caught the attention of the jedi order, who approached Karakis and offered to take him in and train him as a Shadow. Despite his constant requests, he could never convince the masters to take his brother in as well, their reasoning being that having his twin there would distract him from his training. Dreshand resented this, resented Karakis and the order, and it was no surprise that Karakis soon learned that his brother had disappeared alltogether a few years later. Karakis himself suspected Dreshand had gone to seek out the Sith, and so, refusing to let his brother beat him, and determined to bring him back to Coruscant alive, he threw himself into his training, eventually becoming a Jedi Shadow. His instructors had always considered Karakis to be a bit of a hard case, despite their advice and teaching, Karakis did enjoy fighting, not because he liked defeating or killing his opponents, but because of the thrill battles themselves gave him. Now-a-days, Karakis is rarely called upon when the Jedi need someone discreetly and permanently silenced, he has managed this without his targets being linked back to the Jedi Order, which is why they continue to stay allied with him, instead of casting him out.
Personal comment: Karakis is dark ingame, but ICly he's grey. The only person he won't fight is his brother, his brother exists ingame as one of my alts.


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PostSubject: Re: Karakis Application (Approved: 25.Jan.2015.)   Mon 12 Jan - 11:42

You need to work more on the application. A little bit detailed background story, height and weight and motivation, or at least line or two why he is not motivated by anything. You can read details about alignment here.
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PostSubject: Re: Karakis Application (Approved: 25.Jan.2015.)   Fri 16 Jan - 3:52

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PostSubject: Re: Karakis Application (Approved: 25.Jan.2015.)   Fri 16 Jan - 15:02

What signature image?

Edit: I removed your last signature that was saying how the only one you have is not allowed, I don't know what signature you were talking about. When I made this post two days ago and asked you what signature do you refer to you did not answer so I removed your "signature complaint". Complains are done via PMs to GMs, not via signatures.
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PostSubject: Re: Karakis Application (Approved: 25.Jan.2015.)   Sun 25 Jan - 2:46

When I saw his signature I told him to change it's size, not content, it was that big that I had to resize forums to that point of zooming out that text was too small to be seen for reading. Should not extend width of 600px, it is a signature, not a wallpaper or something. Other than that application looks fine so I approve it.

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